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厦门家教中心:高一英语写作练习


来源:厦门家教中心 日期:2018/11/17
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
 
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符(/\),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear David,
I can understand what you feel. When I was young,            76._____ 
I had the same experience as you do,                         
and after I talked with my parents heart                        77._____   
to heart,we had better understanding of each other. So try to    78._____ 
communicate with your parents often let them know that          79._____  
study, and play are all important. You are wise enough          80._____      
to deal with your own business well.Don’t you think that         81.           
all parents in the world love their children as if                  82.______
they are sometimes strict and seriously? I’m sure that your parents   83.______
will trust you and you will enjoy a little of more freedom.        84._______
I hope my advices is of some help to you.                  85._______
                                   Yours
                                 Linda 
 
第二节   书面表达(满分25分)
给你的笔友Fred写信,告诉他你很高兴收到他9月12日的信,同时告诉他你现在英语学习中遇到的一些困难,例如遗忘所学过的单词和词组,对一些习惯用语和语法规则未能弄懂,在学习中常犯错误等。请教他帮助你提一些如何学习好英语的建议。你叫李名,在第一中学高一(三)班学习, 发信日期为2008年9月20日。全文100~120词。 
 
参考答案:
76.what改为 how。
77.and改为but。
78.had后加a。
79.let前加to。
80.all改为both。
81.正确。
82.as改为even。
83.seriously改为serious。
84.去掉 of。 
85.advices改为advice。
书面表达
One possible version:
                                                   Sept. 20,2008
Dear Fred,
I am very pleased to receive your letter of 12 Sept. Thank you. In my school, English is an important subject. I like to study it, but I find it difficult to master it. I often make some mistakes in my exercises. For example, the new words and expressions I have learned are easy to forget, some idioms and grammatical rules are hard to grasp. How can I learn English better? Will you give me some advice on it? I'll be grateful to you. If you have time, please write to me more often.
With my best regards.
Yours,
Li Ming

 

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